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I see me everywhere
Have you looked?
Have you seen?
I am inside of you.
I am with the wandering lost,
               the uncertain,
Even the one’s who think they know.
I am
Bleak
and
Weak,
But I grow stronger
With each moment you turn to me.
I am in that moment,
           That one big moment,
you never thought would come.
                             The moment in time
where vulnerable you
will break free of the
Tight chains
that have held you to this world.
But, here I come again
with the quickness of a dazzling shooting star,
Like the star you wish to be.
past thoughts now zoom before you:
The future you dared to view,
The dreams you dared to dream,
     are now within your unsteady grasp.
I can feel you holding tight to your
Hopes
and
Aspirations.
But, I grip harder and
Smother you in
Uncertainty.
I am in desperation for another
Easy victim
To add to the many already captured.
Yet, you think back to all those
Moments and thoughts
That you thought you had lost,
And now occurs a struggle within yourself,
The worst one of all.
The winner in this
Brutal treacherous battle?
I cannot yet say,
Since I am always with you,
At each new coming day.
FOR I AM DOUBT!
And what you thought
IS NOT!
©2005-2009 ~runningwriter3
:iconrunningwriter3:

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That haunting fear of failure that just will never go away.

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:iconmaria2887:
wonderful! i love your writings
:iconrunningwriter3:
wow, thank you so much and thanks for the feedback. I like your poems they show the sad reality of most boys, but I do believe that there are a few good ones out there. You use good repition.
:iconmaria2887:
thanks a bunch, sadly i keep coming to the bad guys...the ones who hurt but im hoping to get a good one one time
:iconrunningwriter3:
i know what you mean, I do the same thing to. For some reason I keep going for guys that are not on the same path in life as me. Maybe it's just the way things are supposed to work out, you go through enough shit, so then you know when you've met your husband because he will seem like a god compared to the others! Or maybe I'm just really idealistic, meh :).

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